english lesson~

Today our lecturer asked us to write a paragraph which is narrative paragraph, persuasive paragraph, descriptive paragraph or explanative paragraph. Me, SQ, PY and ZH were given the task to write a narrative paragraph each. Then SQ and PY form a group to write a paragraph, so me and ZH have to be a group. Below is our paragraph :

One day, when I open my eyes, I realize that I am not in my own room. When I look around on it, the room is a bit messy and fills with the reek of alcohol smell. I quickly get down from the bed and start to search for my cloth. Suddenly, I see a photograph hanging on the wall. The lady on the photograph looks familiar to me. I try to refresh back what had happened yesterday but my head get pain. At the same time, I hear someone is getting up and walking towards the room I am staying. I get a bad feel about this so I try to find a place to hide. However, it is too late. The door is open. The yesterday’s memories start to flash back…....... (by Shu Qin & Pei Yin)

She ran down the dark alley, desperately trying to escape from her fear. The series of event keep replaying in her mind, still unable to believe the horrible truth that is about to take place. She turned at the end of the alley, it was a dead end. She had nowhere to run. As the predator move closer to the prey, she could sense his heavy footsteps and his sharp and fast breathing. She desperately look around for any sharp metal object, wooden planks or anything hard and viscous enough to protect herself. Just as the man closes up on her, her hand grabbed on to something hard and cold…....... (by Zhen Hui & Fung Ming)

What do u think after u read this two opening paragraph? Do u think other way else?? Haha.. Anyway, that is just for fun… ^^

update~!

好久没有update我的部落格了，
因为我的房间上不到网啊...
好伤心噢...有broadband又如何？
又不能上网...要上网又要到楼上的读书室去，麻烦死了！
我好久没有上facebook了，要在繁忙中寻找消遣的东西也难...
最近在烦着的事情很多，课业已经开始了，虽然课业比上个学期少，但还是造成我很大的压力...
我真的很希望我可以赶快把能够做的课业先完成，那么回到家乡就没有那么多事情要赶了...
我可以好好跟家人聚一聚了...
我有很努力的在做，但很怕有什么漏掉了...
当学生还真烦叻...
然后明年我们要搬出去住了，但屋子的事情都还没解决...
不知道要租那里的房子，租金、水电费、以后的生活费呢？
我可要好好打算我的开销了...
不然我打算的储蓄可要泡汤了...
这来得太快了，我可没有想到我要那么早面对这些...
让我有点措手不及...
还有室友的事也让我很烦，
我可以做得很自私，选我喜欢的室友，
但我总不能那么不想别人的感受吧！
我不自私，又会很难过，
我该怎么办？
谁可以教教我呢？
现在H1N1这个病越来越严重了，
希望我的朋友们都能够好好照顾自己
不要病倒了噢...
Jun, Ling, Fong...
今年要考试了，
要加油噢！你们行的！
Joo, Nee,
在大学的日子好吗？
好久没有见到你们了，有机会的话，在KL见噢！
miss u all~
还有很久没有见的朋友们...
你们都还好吗？
有机会的话我们一起来个聚会好不好啊？
好想念我们以前在中学时期打打闹闹的时候，
一起去逛街的时候...
Qin,
在这里想告诉你，我真的把你当成是我很好的朋友，
有什么误会都好，不要忘记，
我们还是好朋友
有什么误会的话，说出来好吗？
不说出来的话，就没有办法解决了...

~ all d best my friend ~